Hi Gary. Thanks for reaching out. I unfortunately won’t have time to read the MS. I’m really sorry, but I’m super over-extended and have several people angry with me already for being behind on things.
If you’re trying to get published, etc., though, I’d be happy to talk about it sometime if you’re interested, since I learned a lot in the years I spent trying to sell my first book.
I am a Washington, DC attorney and an amateur novelist. May I interest you to take a look at an unusual work of fiction I have titled, The Emerald Archive? The text is in the attachment.